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New to bonsai, how did I do?

Posted: August 16th, 2015, 6:13 pm
by Bentod
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Re: New to bonsai, how did I do?

Posted: August 16th, 2015, 6:39 pm
by Axeman
Nice tree, well done!
Axe

Re: New to bonsai, how did I do?

Posted: August 16th, 2015, 6:42 pm
by Elmar
Good start Bentod,
Do you know what species this is? Can you tell us a bit about this one and how you got to where it is now? Make for a good read...


Cheers
Elmar

Re: New to bonsai, how did I do?

Posted: August 16th, 2015, 6:49 pm
by Bentod
Thanks, pretty pleased with how it's turned out. It is a tea tree (twisted sister) native to the area I live in, central Victoria. Had it in a fairly ordinary pot for around two years. It was a twin trunk and much bigger, so thought it was time to do some sprucing

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Re: New to bonsai, how did I do?

Posted: August 16th, 2015, 6:50 pm
by Bentod
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Re: New to bonsai, how did I do?

Posted: August 16th, 2015, 6:56 pm
by Elmar
Hahaha looks like you need to mow the lawn! ;)

Tea trees are very forgiving and a great place to start!
What style are you going for? Have you chosen one yet?


Cheers
Elmar

Re: New to bonsai, how did I do?

Posted: August 16th, 2015, 7:26 pm
by Bentod
Not really sure if I've chosen a "style" as such. It's heading somewhere

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Re: New to bonsai, how did I do?

Posted: August 16th, 2015, 8:22 pm
by kcpoole
Elmar wrote: What style are you going for? Have you chosen one yet?
A nuralistic "australian" style

Nice tree and nice composition. I like it. :yes:
drop the right hand branching a little and you re done.

Ken

Re: New to bonsai, how did I do?

Posted: August 16th, 2015, 8:39 pm
by Bentod
As in its right hand? To even up the weight?

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Re: New to bonsai, how did I do?

Posted: August 16th, 2015, 11:52 pm
by kcpoole
More to close up some of the open space on the right hand side of the trunk, and to give more of a difference in the lowest foliage on either side.
To me looks a little too symmetrical in that respect

Re: New to bonsai, how did I do?

Posted: August 17th, 2015, 9:40 pm
by thoglette
Damn fine start! :beer: