Well done on the progress.
Still think some of the branch selection and styling could be improved but it's certainly going in the right direction.

I would take the tree into Ray or to Leong at bonsai south, great blokes and willing to share.Qitianlong wrote:Hi Jag01 and Josh!
Thanks for your comments and suggestions!
I'll take some close-ups of the trunk and post them, to see if there are any suitable buds there.
Regarding the branching, I see what you mean with your examples, and how my tree looks all over the place. With the few LA that I have I guess I've been inspired by Ray's (nesci), the hollowed out trunk one on your way in on the right, with the branches curving around to the front and out. Geez I love that tree, but I can see how that works on his, but on this kinda formal upright tree it looks a little strange and disorganised. I'm gradually gaining more confidence to cut back harder and work the tree more, but I really need to take it into a clinic somewhere and have it worked on by someone who knows what their doing, and I can observe. If only I could attend the school of bonsai beginners classes this year... but they're on Thursdays and I work 8am-8pm.
Thanks again for all your comments... have a lot to think about with this tree... branch cutters in hand...