I've been lurking around these forums long enough, it's time to pluck up the courage and get some feedback on my own projects.

Today I wired up the small branches on a weedy privet I dug out of the garden about a year ago. I split this tree in two at the root level, so it has another larger half as well. Anyway, attached are my photos of tree after some light wiring and my attempt at a design for it.
That left most trunk is dead, so I'm thinking I'll try my hand at jinning it at some point.
Would love to get some feedback

Peter