AusBonsai

Hi,
would like to share in order to get some opinions. thanks

Nice trunk on this, you are well on the way to achieving a really nice raintree.

agreed on that one ash

this has a nice trunk and is already on its way, your heading in the right direction with it mate

build the branches and you will have a nice tree

you mean in both ?

Hi Amazonida, the second tree needs the top shortened, its too tall with not enough taper. Also with that beautifully curved base you need to continue those curves all the way up the trunk. the new top section is too straight. You could almost make a good semi cascade from this tree if you had a good branch on the outside of that major curve.
Craig

i thought it was all the one tree


i agree with what craig has said about the second tree

ok, jamie. agreed. will do it and post. Craigw has great ideas