Firstly good onya for improving the trunk line !!! I would still like to see more movement in the 1st half of the trunk. tighten up the bend .
To me like Craig it looks like too much foliage out of branches, sometimes those lankier inner shoots are your way to bring the foliage back in closer to the trunk if pruned / energy balanced correctly. Not to late to pop foliage back closer to the trunk. All in all you have still improved this tree and will learn alot from this excercise.
