Jpb styling and virt

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Jpb styling and virt

Post by eliass »

Please offer your opinions on the following tree and the direction I want to take it....

Thank you for your time.

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Re: Jpb styling and virt

Post by shibui »

If it were mine I'd rotate the virt 90 degrees to make an upright tree eliass ;)

I think there is a risk of thickening the trunk too much where you have left 2 or more branches at each level. I'd try to make the tree with just 1 at each spot.
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Re: Jpb styling and virt

Post by eliass »

Thanks Neil.... I just repoted it so I will leave the branch for this season... Ps this is one of yours the roots are fantastic no doubt because of the work you put in on these trees..
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