today's efforts elm and azalea

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today's efforts elm and azalea

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hey everyone :wave:

so today i picked up a little elm
ive had this azalea for a couple of months but didnt know what to do with it
i had some "inspiration" haha if you can call it that :lost:
ken gave some advice on the azalea which was a 3 trunk setting
but to be honest i struggle with 1 trunk let alone 3 :lol:
so i gave it a go an this is how it turned out
i was thinking a windswept style maybe not the most
appropriate style for an azalea?
and i was thinking tomorrow i would run a saw straight between
the 2 trees and separate them not sure if this is a good idea or not?
an turn the other tree into a broom

any way the azalea up first what do you all think?
before.jpg
windswept front.JPG
base.JPG
both.jpg
now for the elm any styling advice? i like it but i think near the upper middle half is a problem
it kinda looks like a bar branch there not directly opposite but there close
what should i do? remove one? or leave it? or something else?
before.jpg
front.JPG
top.JPG
barbranch.JPG
any advice would be much appreciated :tu2:
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Re: today's efforts elm and azalea

Post by shibui »

I'd take the apex out of the elm above the highest branch then bring that final branch up as a new apex. Gets rid of the problem of 2 close branches creating reverse taper, adds more movement and taper - Win, win, win!
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Re: today's efforts elm and azalea

Post by matty-j »

thanks for the advice shibui much appreciated :tu2:

i removed the left hand branch instead of the apex because it had a crack in it from my heavy handedness
and was worried that i would loose it any way so i removed it and shortened the apex slightly

a quick pic i think ill slip pot this into a larger pot and just let it grow freely
for quite a while
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