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This master class (advanced critique) does not normally involve drawings however they are the best to be involved in both as a participant and an observer. Each participant is allowed to have 2 trees critiqued, sometimes (as was the case with this JBP) I already had the plan but I wanted to be sure it was the correct decision. We discussed which would be the back branch, and if we should keep a jin and how much jin.Boics wrote:Pot #1.
Mysays that the current pot is a bit too large.
Did Hiro do a sketch of this tree Gerard?
If so perhaps you could add it to this thread.
for me it is a much softer pot ( feminine). the others are stronger / harsher and thus will make the tree look stronger as well.Gerard wrote:I am surprised that #2 does not rate a mention.
It has the same size internally as #1 but because it has no lip it is much smaller visually which is what I hope to achieve, I have not yet ruled it out. I suppose that come potting time I will have them all ready to go.