Cedar restyle

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JaseH
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Re: Cedar restyle

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Andrew Legg wrote:I figured out what's bugging me Jase. It's the horizontal Jin. It acts as a visual full stop as the eye moves up the trunk. It's at the wrong angle I think. It does not tie in with the cascade branch. Just a thought. :lost:
The jin didn't bother me, but now you mention it!

I dont think you could lose it, it needs something, maybe shortened a little?
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Re: Cedar restyle

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JaseH wrote:
Andrew Legg wrote:I figured out what's bugging me Jase. It's the horizontal Jin. It acts as a visual full stop as the eye moves up the trunk. It's at the wrong angle I think. It does not tie in with the cascade branch. Just a thought. :lost:
The jin didn't bother me, but now you mention it!

I dont think you could lose it, it needs something, maybe shortened a little?
cedar_virt3.resized.png
All good ideas. I will revisit this tree on my next shift break and see what I can do.
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