GavinG wrote: ↑July 13th, 2024, 6:00 pm
My 2c., I hope you don't mind.
There's lovely energy in all of it, but as you say the top doesn't seem to sit with the rest of it. I think the clearest angle, from the photos, is in no. 3 - that swoop over to the left is great! If you get rid of the top completely, there is already the jin there - another might not be any better. Another thought might be to take off the top horizontal branch - it's good fun, but it doesn't relate, for me - and bring the left branch down as hard as you can, and maybe lean the tree a little to the left - the activity on the left then might counterbalance the right branch/trunk thing a bit - it's a bit too high to do that now.
Just a stab in the dark, it looks like it's a lot of fun!
Gavin
Don't mind at all Gavin. Actually I was hoping some one would chime in. Always like hearing your thoughts.
I agree with you 100% it's that swooping trunk that is the best feature, and the top just kind of stabs straight into it. I am leaning towards no jin as well if I get rid of it. It would only be a straight boring one anyway. The only part of the top I will be sad to cut off is the fun little loop at the top of the straight section.
I've mocked up a few different options to give an idea of partially or fully removing the upper section.
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For me this is the best view to appreciate the branch movement.
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This front probably has the best root base (it's hard to see in the photo because it was covered in dirt yesterday). Also the trunk comes towards you but perhaps a little too much right now.
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This is a bit less extreme and could possibly be a good compromise or first step towards taking all the top off. The remaining top section would just need some re-working.
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