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Re: The virt thread

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Wow Squiz id love to see more of your sketches if possible :)

If i can expose the trunk of my new privet i might harrass you to throw some ideas my way, you have a brilliant eye for detail.
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Re: The virt thread

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Thanks vs.

Happy to have a go at anyone's tree. I will try and put one of mine up in the next few days.

Chris h. I thought your first lower right branch could be the lower right I have shown and the branch above that would be wired up as the new leader. It is hard to see sometimes in a photo but I thought those two showed a few buds. The problem with my virt is that a lot of you good healthy growth would have to go and with jbp s I know how hard that can be. Easier for me to draw than for you to cut.

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Re: The virt thread

Post by Chris H »

Squizz

I just popped outside and had a look and there are some shoots could make it possible.

BUT.

The trunk doesn't taper quite so much. My idea was that as the trunk is very dominant and solid I want to keep the foliage compact to keep it a relatively thin sillouette so it's tall in perspective.
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Re: The virt thread

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squizzy wrote:This was my response to olivecrazys olive
olives olive 001.jpg
I know it has a top but I thought why not cut it off. Inspired by one of anttl threads where he took everything of a J procumbens

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Ive had an idea to go this way over the yrs Squizz great drawing ill train that lower branch as you have drawn i like it heaps :worship: even if the top stays it will fit nicely a win win really :tu: thanks again for the virt :beer:

Have ago at this one if you like my latest virt on it is here viewtopic.php?f=104&t=11269
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Hey olive crazy,

I just liked the look of that live vein wrapping around the dead wood and to me the tree from there up detracts from that. I see it this way. The first thing I see is the base( nice and thick) and then I see the foliage and I look for where that comes from so I trail back and see it wrapping around that dead wood. Like I said this was inspired by anttl J procumbens thread where he has the big purposly grown deadwood above a compact semi cascade of foliage. Before that I would never have thought of it but now I love the concept.

Awesome stock by the way. Good luck with the tree it will be great either way.

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Re: The virt thread

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hi everyone,
I just got this Mountain Hemlock and in needs of help styling it. thx


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Re: The virt thread

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[quote="Xavier"]hi everyone,
I just got this Mountain Hemlock and in needs of help styling it. thx
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Re: The virt thread

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Mate, It's a bit hard to get a proper idea of the tree without a basic front on photo.. that might make it easier for people to make a virt. :2c:
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Hi Xavier,

I have to agree with ben on it being hard to design based on the photos provided. Anyhow as this is what you have provided I have posted a sketch of what I could see working but please note this is based on no knowledge of the species and the fact it is difficult to see the tree in its entirety.
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Here is my idea of what id like this gardenia to look like after 10-20 yrs worth of patient work.

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Tree here:

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Nice Drawing Andre and quite doable.
Gardenia Back bud realy well so you will get foliage in closer too :yes:

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Re: The virt thread

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Hey Ken thanks, i hope its achievable. Any idea why my pic is cut in half?
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Great drawing andrew. :cool:

Not sure why the picture is cut in half. I can jst make out the pencil of a shallow rectangle pot I think.

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squizzy wrote:Great drawing andrew. :cool:

Not sure why the picture is cut in half. I can jst make out the pencil of a shallow rectangle pot I think.

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I think it may be too big of an image, just need to right click and open in new tab to see it in its entirety.

Thank you Squizz, yes i sketched the pot but im undecided to what sort of pot ill use.
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Andrew F wrote:
squizzy wrote:Great drawing andrew. :cool:

Not sure why the picture is cut in half. I can jst make out the pencil of a shallow rectangle pot I think.

Squizz
I think it may be too big of an image, just need to right click and open in new tab to see it in its entirety.

Thank you Squizz, yes i sketched the pot but im undecided to what sort of pot ill use.
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Gotta say mate, bloody breathtaking artwork there.. I look forward to seeing the art come to life in your tree. :tu:
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