Ledanta Virtual Competition - September '09

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Re: Ledanta Virtual Competition - September '09

Post by Leigh Taafe »

Malus- Profusion Tree.gif
Here is a picture of some foliage if you want to use it for your virt.

Sorry I was a bit late for you Stymie - feel free to do another one if you want to use some foliage.

Thanks Ant - yes a tree needing alot of work - but definately plenty of potential.

Post your entries in this thread, comp closes midnight 15th Sep.

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Re: Ledanta Virtual Competition - September '09

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Hey all

A quick sketch here,
I chose Front 3 for this one here

I noticed a bit of a 'kink' in the branch (circled in red) and I thought it was actually a unique feature of the tree (yes yes, the nebari and taper is awesome too, i have not forgotten that)
So I thought about trying to be artsy and use this 'kink' as a precedent in shaping the branches of the tree (also curvy, erratic etc)
Second branch from bottom on the right should probably be a bit more thicker and longer but meh.

Just a bit of fun.

A quote I am fond of is from the late John Naka (somewhere along the lines of) "Make your bonsai look like a tree don't make your tree look like a bonsai"
I don't think I achieved that at all with this virtual :roll: lol
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Re: Ledanta Virtual Competition - September '09

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Lets see, this one didn't turn out as I envisioned, but thought I might put it out there... food for thought?
Tree is also nekkid (how obscene! :shock:)

And yes, I have proposed something totally outrageous! :shock:
I noticed that before the trunk at the base has some sort of symmetry, as is the nebari. Just thought I might abuse this and see what happens...

1) The tree already has super nice taper, so this may not be a wise move!!
2) This will probably be achieved through many thread grafts and many many years

Meh, here it is
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Re: Ledanta Virtual Competition - September '09

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still working on it..
trying to put some effort in lol :)
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Re: Ledanta Virtual Competition - September '09

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Webos, you getting out the chalkboad?
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Re: Ledanta Virtual Competition - September '09

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ok here it is. spent a bit of time!

i picked this front because i think it had more character :)
i added some branching and developed the apex. and i know the pads are quite full for what it is but from the foliage picture it looked quite solid so i thought i would work. i tried altering the trunk a bit with taking some out and adding some natural tears and a bit of dead wood. am thinking of doing this with the other angle i like will see what happens! :D
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Re: Ledanta Virtual Competition - September '09

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Some great virts here - keep them rolling in!
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Re: Ledanta Virtual Competition - September '09

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Just wondering, whats a great Virt Bonsai Program?

from what i've seen a lot of you are using paint ( :P ) and Photoshop,
but are there and 3D bonsai programs anyone would recommend?
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Re: Ledanta Virtual Competition - September '09

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i just had to snatch this idea up before someone else got it :D

:arrow: lose the top and mimic that wood for the carving

:arrow: hollow out the main trunk line and get some more depth from inside that trunk

:arrow: bend that main branch down closer to the trunk
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i might have a chance to photoshop it 2nyt...
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Re: Ledanta Virtual Competition - September '09

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aaron_tas wrote:i just had to snatch this idea up before someone else got it :D

:arrow: lose the top and mimic that wood for the carving

:arrow: hollow out the main trunk line and get some more depth from inside that trunk

:arrow: bend that main branch down closer to the trunk
september treeComp.jpg
i might have a chance to photoshop it 2nyt...
nice one! would like to be able to photo shop like that :D ( i know its a sketch)

Jordy-i actually use pixlr.com for mine, takes a bit to get used to but its online free and easy!
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Re: Ledanta Virtual Competition - September '09

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ok, so i fell to sleep early and made my photoshop image of the tree this morning...
Crabapple3_edited-1.jpg
:arrow: i think it looks a bit better with some various renders over the top in my opinion, but im sure if this happens to the tree it would look better in person :D
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Re: Ledanta Virtual Competition - September '09

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That would be a great idea for this tree in a demo to someone's club - or at someone's show! Or maybe I just get the video camera out!
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Re: Ledanta Virtual Competition - September '09

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i can think of the perfect man for the job, fresh on 'the list' and i think he actually owns this tree...

maybe there can be an ausbonsai demo somewhere sometime soon :?:

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Re: Ledanta Virtual Competition - September '09

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I wonder if the AABC would accept us as a club :shock: ;)
Oh and thats a ripper Aaron.
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Re: Ledanta Virtual Competition - September '09

Post by bodhidharma »

Nice one Arron, if that can be done without killing the tree that would be spectacular
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