Thanks for taking the time to analyze the tree agian Tony
I was thinking hard of what you taught me at the workshop concerning cascades and their branches. I was pretty lost which branches where meant to be doing what amongst all that foliage but I am happy with where I got in the end. Although the hardest decision was around the area you suggest to end the tial having 4 branches able to do much the same job as each other. Two ended up becoming Jins but now I think one may have made a great sacrifice branch as you suggest.
I was planning on making the final decision on the length of the tial once the rock was fully uncovered so I can take it all in.
The branches look a little flat with the trunk, ie forward and back
I figger you mean they don't have much up and down movement. Maybe I am thinking of layered pads too much

I am sure you will get a chance to show me on the tree in the future before the branches get too thick
in the first pic which looks like a good front, and whare we were looking on the day. Remember the two views for cascade are 'face' or 'profile' with 'face view' looking at the cliff with branches to the left and right, and 'profile view' looking along the cliff with the branches to one side, left in this case. With your tree 'face' would have the longest branches on the left, and 'profile' would have the longest branches behind the trunk to the left.
I remember this from the workshop and hope that is where I am heading. Some useful branches were weaker than others under all that foliage so I left them longer for now.
Anyway I will make sure I get this tree along to one of your workshops in the next year or two whether it be here or elsewhere
Thanks agian

It's too bad your in such a hurry cause the stories I could tell you, Bushels and baskets of stories, hole crates full of stories. But if you can spare a moment I will tell you one story.