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first time now in box hope to refine now to refine hope to make a good tree
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I like :yes:
but maybe reduce the lenght of the top growth a little more? the one standing straight up is too long IMHO

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Re: elm

Post by Keep Calm and Ramify »

:wave: Gramck,
I actually preferred the view of trunk line & branching structure in the first (before) pic - the slight lean added interest & tended to give the impression of more age than the now upright. :imo:
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