Which side please???

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Which side please???

Post by Jester »

Hi guys, I would like your opinion on which side of the trunk should be the front on this Serissa Serissoides pls.

Many Thanks (Bear with me while I upload the files. Having some probs)
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I much prefer the first pic as the front. The roots are balanced in that view.
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Post by MelaQuin »

I agree with Tim. The second photo looks as tho the 'bum' is curling protectively into the soil... not a good feeling. #1 has an array of roots, nice texture to the trunk and interesting movement. I don't see there is a choice.
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Yeh first pic :)
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First picture shows the roots best. Remember to spread and uncross as many as you can when you repot.
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First pic. But if you trim a couple of exposed roots in the second to show a good spread from the nerbari then the second one could be better.
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again, first pic. do you mind if i ask how old your serrisa is. thanks.
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Hi Platinum, it is approx 9 years old and I have it on a steady diet of Rocket Fuel, Nitrous Oxide and Steroids. There is another one of mine that is in the post called : "Swamp Cypress and Serissa".
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the first photo is better. better nebari too
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yer.the first pic. love the movement in the trunk. could ya give us a pic of the full tree?
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1st one does it for me
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Sure Mason , but you will have to forgive me....., this photo goes back to June so the foliage is not as thick.
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hey jester :!:

do you know if serissa bud hard if ya smash em :?:

:idea: its just that i can see bunjin in this tree, and the trunk would be quite powerful in comparison to most other serissa i see...
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If you mean bud hard with flowers? Well I don't want them to flower. Not yet anyway, as it takes energy away from the leaves. That's why I keep the Potassium Low. If you mean leaf buds.....Yes! Absolutely.
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first pic has taper, second one does not.
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