Callistemon - Bottle brush

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Callistemon - Bottle brush

Post by jwishbone »

hey guys

Ive been stuck with this tree,

just wondering if you guys could provide me with some inspiration or any suggested design would be great...

also wondering how long should the leaves show growth take its been 5 weeks or so since ive chopped it.. just havent seen any signs of growth just yet...


thanks
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these are some ideas ive come up with so far........
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Im not really sure on design. I think personally I would go with the third idea you have.
I love the trunk and nebari :D It looks great
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ohh ok cool

i wanted to cut the middle of the swollen trunk to further create the V look on that area....

hmm... decisions decisions... hehe


thanks for your input
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Post by Pup »

G,day jwishbone. The options you have given in the first and second pictures give you a twin trunk. Mother and child.
The third gives a somewhat confused feeling, it is neither twin trunk or single.
I suggest if you go that way lose the small trunk, and make a feature of the scar.

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thanks pup....

those are good points


do you guys think theres something i can do to the swollen truck?

anything special?


cause i dont see much trees with that type of trunk....
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jwishbone wrote:thanks pup....

those are good points


do you guys think theres something i can do to the swollen truck?

anything special?


cause i dont see much trees with that type of trunk....
I would airlayer at a point that give you a better root spread ( nebari ) these tree's do it easily.

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ok so thats another option... das good.. thanks
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I personally don't go for the secondary trunk in its present form. It could be carved down to jin or removed at the fold in it's base,
Wait for signs of growth before making any decision.
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Post by pasquale »

Hey jwishbone,
Are you sure it is a callistemon? Does it have yellow flowers? It looks like it could be a hakea or even an acacia.
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pasquale wrote:Hey jwishbone,
Are you sure it is a callistemon? Does it have yellow flowers? It looks like it could be a hakea or even an acacia.
oh I thought it was Callistemon??

it did have yellow flowers... oops hehe
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stymie wrote:I personally don't go for the secondary trunk in its present form. It could be carved down to jin or removed at the fold in it's base,
Wait for signs of growth before making any decision.
i agree ... i might cut it into a jin...

never tried one before... so this might be the time to do it.. :)
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I was thinking the same as pasquale but didn't wanna jump to conclusions, I have never seen a Callistemon like that before but if you asked me to guess I think I would agree with pasquale and say it looks more like an Acacia. Regarding the styling I can see what Pup is eluding to, mother & daughter would work with this in time. I have read around that if this is the style your after it is better to have both apexes (spelling?!) pointing in the same sort of direction, as if the younger is following the parent.
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Post by Joel »

I don't think it has leaves so it must be an Acacia.

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Post by Pup »

Huh looking at the leaves! it is not a Callistemon. Not being a Botanist or even a qualified horticulturist.
I will make my excuse as I did not look to closely at the pictures as I did at the virtuals.

Having now looked at the foliage and noting where Jwishbone resides. I would hazard a guess at one of the many Angophora's
or even a Leptosremun. With a large lignotuber I would go for the former.

Just my humble opinion ;) Pup
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