I think the trunk chop suggest by Tgooboon is worth considering and doesn't mean you have to end up with a squat / sumo tree. You can always get a new leader and rebuild the top to any desired height. The problem I see is the long straight section in the middle with the only branches being bar branches (two branches directly opposite).
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You could keep the height, but the lowest branch is the most interesting and not sure how you could fix that middle section. Maybe with an approach graft. Sure PJF back bud a lot, but It's not likely to back bud where you want it on that straight section unless you chop it somewhere. Even if you bring the foliage in, those bar branches with the hole in the center really draws the eye in.
Disclaimer: Although PJF can be bullet proof, doing a major trunk chop still has some risk and the cut takes a while to heal.
Another option would be layering the top off.
I also think where Tgooboon has suggested cutting the lower branches back to is a good idea. It will help bring the foliage in and introduce ramification closer to the trunk. I still like the idea of keeping some green on when pruning back, even though it's a PJF. I've experienced a PJF giving up on a lower branch when I cut it back beyond the last bit of green.
I agree with what shibui is saying about defoliating multiple times and asking yourself why? Defoliating isn't going to bring the foliage closer to the trunk. You are better off pruning and then once you have good branching and secondary branching then letting it grow out and healthy and then think about defoliating. Because you are going to be pruning back hard, it's almost *like* you are defoliating the whole tree, but it's also good to understand what you are doing is pruning, and defoliating has a different aim.
I also agree that the root crossing over the front needs work. I don't think the other roots are a problem.
Regardless of chop or not, I think you should look at your tree and think about:
- What do I want my tree to look like? I've had trees sit on the bench for a couple of years until I have that moment where I can see the long term vision for the tree. This is very helpful in driving decisions around major cuts and branch placement.
- Ratio and scale is important. It doesn't matter if you have a tall lanky tree or a squat sumo; a well proportioned tree helps you see "a tree" and also helps the viewer see the tree as a whole. This thread is absolute gold:
https://www.bonsainut.com/threads/1-to- ... ure.21199/ . I don't think there is a perfect ratio, but you should still aim for a proportion and scale over the whole tree. That also includes vertical distance between branches.
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