Styling advice on this Chinese Elm?

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Styling advice on this Chinese Elm?

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Hi all, This Elm needs lots of ramification, but any other thoughts would be most welcome?
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Looks good mate, just keep going with it.

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I think perhaps the middle section is a bit to large and lacking taper. It just seems wrong to me given the great taper from the base.

That being said I would be very happy if it were mine :tu2:
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Hi Siddhar
I reckon it needs to be copped at the bottom of the vertical section. this is the same diameter as the section below and thus has no taper there
I would cut and regrow above that bit to make full use of the lovely lower trunk
Also the top 2 segments are too long anyway and again no taper between them.

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Possibly the only thing I would do is get rid of that last straight area near the apex by removing at the height of the bottom of window sill -then reposition that new forward leader :2c:
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Hi Siddhar, i've been working mine for 16 years now and yours has more appeal and is more pleasing to my eye . If it was mine i would slip pot it into a larger tray and spread the roots but not root prune , 1-2 days after a good soaking as its leafed out . .After a period of root run the foliage will no doubt begin ramification , allow this to grow outer most for this season trimming only the extreme tips . With all the branches up top this should improve the taper . If you are set on reducing the height i would then choose a new apex and wire it applying a little more movement into the upper section , but not chop the top .. After this season the tree should be set for what ever decision you can comfortable make .

Each and everyone of us has a different opinion and a different styling idea and its difficult to replicate someones design or even maintain someones tree . . I would be more than happy to have it sit next to my Elms .

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I agree with Alpine. You have the basic structure and the tree needs secondary and tertiary branching. Wire and let grow de-wire and cut back to second leaf for ramification and movement. Just time and patience and a little knowledge needed. Should be a great tree in 10-15 years.
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Great advice thanks to all of you. I think I will just develop the secondary and tertiary branching and give this tree some time to develop. :tu:
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bodhidharma wrote:I agree with Alpine. You have the basic structure and the tree needs secondary and tertiary branching. Wire and let grow de-wire and cut back to second leaf for ramification and movement. Just time and patience and a little knowledge needed. Should be a great tree in 10-15 years.
I agree with both Alpine and Bodhi. You might find Colin Lewis's,"Art of Bonsai Design", where he details the progress (including building ramification) of a number of his elms, interesting. Your local libray may have it or be able to source a copy for you (ISBN 0-4027-0070-9),

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Hi all, Thought I'd update this Elm for you. It's amazing what can be accomplished in 2 months. You may notice a mound of soil at the base of the tree, I've also applied the toothpick method to this tree to correct the trees nebari.
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:yes: great woyk Sidd,
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Hi Siddhar, well done!
It looks great now that the foliage has filled out more and you removed that lower branch.
Did you also reduce the height a little? I have been closely looking at the OG pic and the latest and I think you may have?
Funny, when first saw this post I thought the tree needed serious height reduction...boy was I wrong!
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:yes: great woyk Sidd,
Thanks Craig,

Im amazed at what can be achieved with Chinese Elms, very fast in getting the desired results :tu2:

Hi Siddhar, well done!
It looks great now that the foliage has filled out more and you removed that lower branch.
Did you also reduce the height a little? I have been closely looking at the OG pic and the latest and I think you may have?
Funny, when first saw this post I thought the tree needed serious height reduction...boy was I wrong!
Cheers, Dario.
Thanks Dario, I did reduce the height be about 2 inches, found a new leeder and then wired the apex and lowered some branches a little more. I've been feeding my trees like made this growing season and have had some great results overall :tu:
I think this Elm will look really good in another 2 years. I just need to decide on a new pot for it? :lost:
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Post by Craig »

siddhar wrote:but any other thoughts would be most welcome?
G'day Sidd, tell me to get lost but something for your consideration; IMo i feel the tree is unbalanced in the Apex area, i think it's the top leader going back against the flow of your tree. I can see you have the very top leader going to the right but i think if you were to wire the next one down to the right(as marked in red) and go from there, the tree would flow alot nicer, :2c: what do you think mate ??

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im with Craig :2c:
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