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Design ideas privet

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Hi all I have this large privet air layer with 3 trunks . I originally wanted to make it a triple trunk. Now I'm not sure what to do .

I would love to hear ideas for the design of this one . ImageImageImage
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Post by Guy »

If you want the triple --because of the reverse taper in the lower trunk I would airlayer at the widest part where the three trunks meet-I have made an assumption that privets air layer easily.
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Cut the two larger trunks off and then let it rest. I think it will show you a lead to follow. Currently there is just too much wood for my liking.
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Was thinking the same as watto.
Kepp only 1 trunk and one of the smaller ones at that. Look for some movement in the junction and that will give movement and taper

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Re: Design ideas privet

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Thanks for the feedback guys I was concidering reducing it down to one trunk .
How about the first picture as the front and the 2 trunks on the right removed .
It will have better taper and movement . Do u think the remaining trunk will need shortened?
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Re: Design ideas privet

Post by Tony Bebb »

Hey Paul

I agree with Guy and the layer at the junction of the 3 lines. I think the scarring from cutting 2 off would not be desirable. You could carve the scar/s of course but you don't have a lot of thickness to work with to make a good enough feature of it I think. Also the trunk lines are not overly impressive on their own.

The first pic at least shows 3 lines that work together with the small one at the back for depth. It will layer easy enough and you would be good to go now with a layer. It will give you a broader base.

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Re: Design ideas privet

Post by lackhand »

I kind of like the triple, but I think with the proposed new base (thickest are of trunk) being so close to the ground, I might slip it into something deep and ground layer instead of air layer. Different ways to get the same place in the end, so it would just be a matter of preference. :whistle:
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